Today I met her
She stared across giggling
Not at me but at the glow behind me
Her eyes lit up, to the ray that paved way
How innocent was her look
That she left me dazzled throughout the day
A tiny little God’s creature
Has so much to tell and be told, to be one of us…
But would she know
What life has in store
How do i convey it to her
This is the best time of her life
Coz tomorrow she would be, just one of us
Self-made manipulator…
beautiful poem.. the innocence not just reflects on the muse, but also in the selection of words... very nice...
ReplyDeletethank you abhi...its actually a beginning for me too....hoping to write more...
ReplyDeleteOh my my....so u can write as well....
ReplyDeleteNice work...waiting for more... :)
All the best...
thank you Vibha... :)
ReplyDeletegood!!
ReplyDeleteAnd then she grew up...
ReplyDeletewith fragrance.. with colour..with all that is happy..
A realization long subdued..
you have blossomed..
Live long butterfly....
hey those are fantastic lines...thank you...do let me know who is sudden :)btw you must write too if you aren't
ReplyDeletewow Aditi...that is superb...try more...i'll be waiting for them :)
ReplyDeleteGood work aditi. Looking forward to read more
ReplyDeleteWill try some day aditisom :)
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