Thursday, 14 July 2011

Moment called Life...


We are either sides of the same coin
Bring mirth and grief at intervals
And we are destined to happen

Am happy am there, am happy am gone
Coz it is a vicious circle
Life ought to be gone

Time in hand enjoy to the fullest,
Live Laugh Love
Don’t worry of what is on the either sides
Between being born and dead, what exists is Life!
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22 comments:

  1. Anonymous14 July 2011 at 00:44

    I love this poem aditi. Definitely the best so far :)

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  2. aditisom14 July 2011 at 00:46

    Thanks so much...

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  3. Sudden14 July 2011 at 02:21

    Hence Life is walking at the edge of the coin ..
    a pendulum swaying left and right..constant is only the movement..whether its a bright day or its a cold night...

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  4. aditisom14 July 2011 at 02:32

    good good..

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  5. Sudden14 July 2011 at 02:39

    Is my understanding correct aditsom about your poem.

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  6. aditisom14 July 2011 at 02:41

    yes it is, very much...am afraid i don't know your name, coz sudden doesn't ring any bell...tell me who are you?

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  7. Sudden14 July 2011 at 02:52

    Sudden rings - ding dong... :-)..an amateur blogger..could connect to your poems hence commented.

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  8. aditisom14 July 2011 at 02:56

    well am an amateur too...thank you for your comments... :)

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  9. Sudden14 July 2011 at 03:40

    Pleasure, Aditisom.

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  10. aditisom14 July 2011 at 03:42

    :) hope to be writing more, do keep a track and give suggestions

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  11. Sudden14 July 2011 at 03:53

    You are in a frame of grey .... with ripples of thought, I can see...
    streaks of hair beautifully arranged, as they could never be...
    some worries.... wandering in who, where, what and why..
    Some memories better forgotten ... some lanes not to pass by..

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  12. Uma Trika14 July 2011 at 03:56

    Nice one Aditi...Keep it up

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  13. renjithkaripuram14 July 2011 at 04:04

    hey i relly like this !
    am an art guy, just chk mine too....

    http://summeroflove-renjith.blogspot.com/search?updated-min=2011-01-01T00%3A00%3A00-08%3A00&updated-max=2012-01-01T00%3A00%3A00-08%3A00&max-results=29

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  14. aditisom14 July 2011 at 04:06

    What you write is pretty divine...suggests the state of mind...but am a simple poet..too much of thinking is what i cannot do...hence i leave this sonnet incomplete... :)

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  15. aditisom14 July 2011 at 04:06

    thanks Umaji...

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  16. Sudden14 July 2011 at 04:13

    Trust me Aditisom...too much of thinking leads to too much complexity...poetism is just a free state of mind...hence you are a successful poet..and the one i wrote earlier are a few lines on the pic you have posted ...passing thoughts.

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  17. aditisom14 July 2011 at 04:16

    hey renjith thank you...

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  18. aditisom14 July 2011 at 04:23

    "Sudden" your lines you wrote for me or for my writings are appreciated truly...and am not successful am aspiring to be one...

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  19. Sudden14 July 2011 at 04:26

    You will... All the best Aditisom

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  20. aditisom14 July 2011 at 04:30

    thank you!

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  21. Uread20 July 2011 at 04:16

    Sounds beautiful, Aditi. What has caused the sudden rise of the poetess! :) Definitely not the girl I remember dancing with :)

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  22. aditisom20 July 2011 at 04:21

    No wonder you term it sudden then!! :) the auspicious two weeks of July made me write so much, wonder wen the next would be out!! n it is the same gurl you danced with :)

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