Tuesday 8 November 2011

Tell me….


Filled with eagerness
Tell me more
Of everything I don’t know

Birds and sky
The moon and light
Of people quibbling
By my side

If you tell me I shall know
Of the present, the future and all that is worn
I trust, I fail, I get hurt, don’t know where is the end to this start....

If you tell me I shall know
My love, my friend or my foe.

Filled with Eagerness, I want to know
            Why do we cry and why is it so!!

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8 comments:

  1. soumita roy8 November 2011 at 22:50

    love u... muhaaa super like..

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  2. soumita roy8 November 2011 at 22:51

    "I trust, I fail, I get hurt, don’t know where is the end to this start"
    just too gud...

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  3. aditisom8 November 2011 at 22:52

    thank you! muaah!

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  4. Abhi8 November 2011 at 23:08

    Very interesting subject.. hard to imagine this could be so poetically presented as well... A wonderful piece.. you seem to be maturing as a poet.. do we see another Eliot here????

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  5. aditisom8 November 2011 at 23:12

    hey abhi...thank you so much for appreciating...but be rest assured nothing like an Eliot would emerge!

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  6. Anonymous9 November 2011 at 00:17

    I loved the line "Why do we cry and why is it so!!".
    I think I get a hint of emotions that you were going through while writing this.

    Keep writing ;)

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  7. Sudden9 November 2011 at 09:06

    Keep Writing Aditisom.... A nice piece of Art....I am sure you will come up with more treats. All the best..

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  8. aditisom9 November 2011 at 21:34

    thank you Sudden and Nix

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